I Need Your Help

Once again, I am arguing with powers-that-be about the handwritten aspect of my kids book. I hate to make this a public thing, but I need your help. I thought this was a non-issue anymore, but it’s reared its ugly head again.

Is this readable? Be honest (remember, this is a pencil sketch that’s been scanned in. It’s not the final art).

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